四年级英语作文MyClassmate

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2025-10-23 16:41:35

四年级英语作文MyClassmate

My Classmate Qiangqiang

Qiangqiang is my classmate. He is nine years old. He doesn't study hard. He talks a lot in class, so the teacher is often angry with him. He doesn't like to do his homework, but he likes sports. He plays football very well. In fact, he is the best player in our class.

Qiangqiang's father has a clock, and it is very nice. It sings in the morning to wake up Qiangqiang. "What sings in the clock?" One day he wondered. So he opened the clock and took it to parts.

My room

I am happy .I have my own room . Look!This is my room.It’s small but clean.There is a desk and a bed.There are some dolls on my bed .There are two chairs. There is a bookshelf,too.My bookshelf has two layers. I put the story—books on the first layer. I put the other kinds books on the second layer. I often clean it .There are two big windows. On the windows,you can see some nice flowers.I like to watch them grow. And there is a balcony outside the room. I love my room very much.Can you introduce your room?

  My last weekend

I had a busy weekend. On the Saturday, I walked to Lily’s home . I studied English with her. in the afternoon, I cooked noodles with my mother .On Sunday morning, I watched TV, it was fun. Then I went to a park by bike . I flew kites. It was a sunny day. In the evening, I washed my clothes and cleaned my room. My last weekend was very busy. But I was very happy.

My Best Friend

I have a best friend.

She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.

She favorite season is summer,because it‘s hot ,she can eat ice- cream.She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs.

Who‘s she? She is my best friend ---Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name,too---Angle.

译:

我有个个最好的朋友。

她有着长长的黑色直发,大大的黑眼睛和一个小鼻子。她很瘦,对人非常和蔼,她也很可爱。她的英语和语文非常好。她学习十分认真。

她最喜欢的季节是夏季,因为夏天很热,她能吃冰淇凌。她喜欢弹琴,读书和唱歌。

她是谁?她就是我最好的.朋友——孙梦琪。她还有一个很好听的英文名——Angle.(安琪儿)

My Best Friend

I have a lot of friends in Simon English School. One of them is my best friend. His name is boyd.

He and I are both thirteen years old. but I am older than he, and I am fatter than he too. He is shorter than I, and he is thinner than I. He wears a pair of glasses but I don‘t.

He likes to eat pocket-food, and he is a gentleman in a sense that when he has pock-food he will share them with us.

He and I are in the same school and in the same class. So, we can help each other. We alway play in the school together. he likes to do thing I like. He lives in the Ningbo Jiangdong, so he hardly came to my home in Zhenghai but I alway go to his home on weekends and he sometimes will come to my home on weekends. Sometimes we will fight but we alway get along well.

His mother is a doctor in the Li-Hui-Li hospital and I know where her office is. His father is a worker in the Bei-Lun power plant. He is a head of a group. So, his father has a lot of work to do.

He and I are in the same school. We usually have a good time so he is my best friend.

My Teacher-我的老师

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

译文:

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛,一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上,她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。

黄老师非常喜欢狗,因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色,因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。

这就是我喜欢的老师。我们班的同学都非常喜欢她。

【四年级英语作文MyClassmate】

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