英语回信700字

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2025-03-21 11:12:45

Dear Frank,

Long time no see. How are you recently?

I am very happy to receive your letter and glad to hear that you will come to my city and stay with us for a few weeks. My house is on the Heaven Street with five rooms, one of which is living room, two bed rooms, the other two are kitchen and bathroom. I have cleaned a guest room for you. There is a bed, a sofa and three chairs in this 25 square-meters room. If this room is not suitable enough, please write to me and I will prepare another one for you. There is a bus stop near my house, and you can take number 1 bus to the cinema, number 2 to the supermarket in where you can always choose the commodities you need.

If you have other requests, please feel free to write to me. I will try my best to meet your needs. I wish you can come soon and have good days here.

Sincerely yours,

Jaz

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