Hello!My name is Tricky.I'm fifteen years old.I come from New Orleans in America.I'm a happy girl.Listening to music is my hobby.The songs make me happy.So I really like them.
I'm a good student in my teacher's eyes.Because I study very well.There are fourty five students in my classroom.Helen is a tall girl.She has got long yellow hair.Kate is a bit shy.She can play violin very well.Tim is very strong.He can run very fast.Jack is a clever boy.He is very good at math.And they are all my friends.
New Orleans is my hometown.It's near the Mississippi.And it's in the south of America.My hometown New Orleans is the birthplace of jazz.It's not the capital of America,but I love it very much.Can you tell me something about your hometown?
I have got many friends in my classroom.So I feel happy everyday.Do you want to be my friend?
初一:郑嘉慧
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