Everyone has a dream.So do I.I never dream of becoming a cool students because I think a cool student is something I won not have. My dream is very simple but it is hard to come true. That is have a good environment.
There are many kind of pollution on our Earth.Such as white pollution, water pollution ,noise pollution and so on.The pollution is much more serious than I can expect.I see a lot of dirty river beside my home.There is rubbish in the water and the fish are dead.What is more serious,some factories still neglect the environmental rules and throw the waste into the water.They are killing our river!
But we are glad to see that more and more students from all over the world begin to protect the environment.They go to different cites and villages to preside more and more people to join their movement. I think we all can join it. Environment will be better and better.
Protecting our environment is our duty.This is my dream. I will keep struggling for my dream.
六年级:周志鹏
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