2026年中考英语作文热点话题

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2025-06-25 10:40:31

【写作情景】

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动,学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容,用英语写一篇参赛短文。

【提示】

1. 衣着整洁;

2. 保持环境卫生;

3. 待人有礼,乐于助人;

4. 遵守交通规则;

5. ……

【要求】

1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;

3. 词数:80词左右。

【范文】

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

写作思路解析

语言朴实自然,重在记述亲身见闻与感受,依靠巧妙自然的侧面烘托丰富表达维度让行文流畅连贯,立意积极明朗,充满正向力量,读完能够收获精神上的启发。不刻意堆砌华美词汇,依靠细节打动读者。素材源自生活,亲切感十足,叙事条理清楚,是简约风格范文范本。

本文范文仅作写作思路参考,请勿直接照搬抄袭用于作业投稿。

AI作文批改

作文打分:73分(满分100)

存在不足

!叙事只陈述事件结果,缺少过程细节还原,内容略显单薄。修辞运用偏少,文字感染力有限。

综合点评

◆全文思路连贯统一,段落划分规整,行文没有明显卡顿。素材选取贴合题意,不会偏离写作方向。不足之处在于行文缺少节奏起伏,通篇风格平缓,很难抓住读者注意力。

改进建议

↓尝试在叙事中途穿插感悟思考,不要把所有感想堆积在结尾。多挖掘生活化小众素材,摆脱大众化写作题材。

作文优点

★开篇引入自然,能够快速带入情境,避免冗长铺垫。主线清晰明确,全程紧扣写作要求,不容易偏离主题,审题立意较为准确。

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