(2010·江苏省镇江市，七，15)
请仔细阅读上图，对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述(至少3点)，可适当发挥(例如：we are usually fair. we always treat others equally.)。另外，作为一名90后学生，请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，列举至少2点不足之处进行描述。最后，请根据你自己的感悟，对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议。
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as post?90s students, we have so many advantages.
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【答案】one possible version：
as post?90s students，we have so many advantages. we are usually kind and helpful. when someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand. we are also energetic. we like to do sports and go traveling. most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. in addition，we are abviously imaginative. we always try something new and do everything differently.
on the other hand，we also have some disadvantages. to tell you the truth，some of us ar a little impolite. sometimes we can?t express our opinions in a correct ways. what?s more，we are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.
overall，as post?90s students who will enter a middle school，i think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. you should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities. boys and girls，the future is up to us to createe.
写作思路解析
虚实描写相互结合，借助传神到位的神态描写传递情绪变化拓宽文字想象空间，篇章布局精巧得当，详略安排合理，重点段落格外突出。既有实景刻画，又有内心思绪拓展，层次丰富。画面感与思想性兼备，写作手法值得学习。
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