与父母相处的话题类作文难度较大，掌握基本句式，背诵范文非常必要。
(陕西省卷)假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile
写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整；2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；3.词数在60-80左右
Dear Han Mei，
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me，“Be careful while crossing the street。” “Put on more clothes。” “Did you do a good job at school?”And so on. I'm annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do?
Alice
例文
Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you。
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about。
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile。
I hope what I say here can help you a lot。
写作思路解析
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