中国第一位太空人英语作文
china’s first spaceman---yang liwei
yang liwei was born in an ordinary family in liaoning province in 1965. he became a pilot in chinese air force in 1987, spending 1,350 hours in the air. he has spent 5 years training to become a spaceman.
yang liwei was sent into space at 9 a.m on october 15th by china’s shenzhou v spacecraft, which orbited the earth 14 times. he landed safely at 6:23 a.m the net day, making china the third country successfully sending a person into space after the former soviet union and the usa.
yang liwei came back to the earth after a 21-hour trip to space. in space yang recorded everything he saw and showed china’s national flag and the united nations’ flag to the people watching on tv at home.
all of the chinese are proud of our first spaceman---yang liwei.
【中国第一位太空人英语作文】
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