小学1-4年级英语作文参考

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2025-10-22 08:33:10

小学1-4年级英语作文参考

小学四年级英语作文:一场大火A big fire

One night Wu Gang was lying in bed. Then suddenly a loud cry for help woke him up. He looked out of the window and found his neighbour's house was on fire. Wu Gang hurried to telephone 119 for help. Then he ran out at once. He saw many people trying to put out the fire with water, and he quickly joined in. After some time, the firefighters arrived, the big fire was out at last. Luckily, no house was destroyed by the fire and all the people were safe.

小学三年级英语作文:一次活动 An Events

In order to make our city cleaner and more beautiful, the young volunteers of our school went to the people's park this morning and offered our help.

At eight, the head of the park met us at the gate. After being divided into groups, we set out to work at once. Some tidied up the parking area and parked the bike in right place. Some took care of the flowers and bushes, and persuaded people to keep off the grass. Around the tiger den, one group kept order to prevent accidents from happening. at the aquarium, another group worked as guides and advised visitors not to smoke. When some of us were doing cleaning, an old man praised us and said, "well done, young fellows!"

We were all tired but happy. What a beautiful morning today!

小学四年级英语作文:I like autumn

I Love AutumnI like autumn. I love the falling leaves in autumn. They cover the ground with golden yellow. When you walk on them, they rustle beneath your feet, just as if they are singing to you.

I know trees get ready for their next year's rebirth by doing this, so I enjoy them without any sad feelings. The fields in autumn are fruity. People are easy to have good mood in a harvest season. So can't autumn sights bring happiness to us as well?

四年级英语作文:暑期难忘的一件事

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

四年级英语作文:Baking a cake

Anna is girl. She is eleven years old. On Saturday her friend Kerry gives her a call.

“Anna, what do you have to do today,” asks Kerry.

“I don’t have to do anything. But I want to watch TV and play the computer games all day.” says Anna.

“Let’s bake a cake!” says Kerry.

“Sure. But you can’t go to my home and bake a cake.” says Anna.

“Ok, you can go to my home” says Kerry.

Anna is happy. Because she wants to bake a cake.

“Where are going?” asks Anna’s mother.

“I want to go to the Kerry’s home.”

“Ok, but you have to do anything.” says Anna’ mother.

“What?” asks Anna.

“First, you have to feed Mary (The cat in Anna’ home) .Next you have to tidy your room. Finally, you have to do homework .”says Anna’s mother.

“En…ok, I can go to Kerry’s home after lunch. I would tell her .” says Anna.

“Kerry, I can’t go to your home now. But I can go to your home after

lunch.” says Anna.

“Sorry! My home don’t have flour. We can’t bake a cake together.” says Kerry.

“Oh…Ok. Bye.”“Bye.” Now, Anna is not happy.

一年级英语作文:一封信

Dear He Jian,

My name is Wang Jiajia. I study in Xinqi School. I’m twelve years old. I like English very much, because my English teacher is very kind. My favourite fruit is apple, because it’s sweet and healthy. My favourite day is Tuesday, we have computer, P.E. and English. It’s a great day. Tall me about your school, please.

Your pen pal,

Wang Jiajia

[小学1-4年级英语作文参考]

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作文优点

首尾呼应结构运用得当,开头引出主题,结尾收束全文,文章完整性很强。语句通顺,语病极少,叙事条理清楚,可以完整讲清事件脉络,拥有良好的文字表达基础。

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调整开篇结构,精简前期铺垫,加快进入主题的速度。对于重要想法充分展开阐述,不要浅尝辄止。练习多角度挖掘素材,寻找新颖写作切入点,跳出常规范文模板,打造独属于自己的文字风格。

综合点评

文章素材选择贴合主题,内容真实接地气,叙事节奏舒缓,能够静下心来逐步推进情节。作者善于观察生活,把亲身经历转化为写作内容,情感流露自然,不刻意煽情。但部分段落表达偏平淡,缺少亮点句子,难以形成记忆点。

存在不足

!文章感悟较为浅显,仅仅停留在事件表面,缺少深度挖掘。描写手段单一,很少运用环境、神态描写丰富内容。

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