整容演讲稿

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2025-10-19 21:54:03

整容演讲稿范文

Ladies and Gentlemen: Suppose howyou feel when your spouse take you to court for your ugly child it sounds so incredible yet it did happen a news said a man accused his wife who once made the cosmetic surgery after their ugly daughter’s born. The women finally admit she spent 60 thousand for the cosmetic surgery before .the lawsuit was end with the men’s success .How do you feel .My topic today is should we advocate cosmetic surgery

Of course not

as I have search a lot of material for the case of cosmetic surgery accident. My opinion is we should be cautious about using cosmetic surgery .although some time cosmetic surgery can help people who suffered from accident restore one’s look ,it should not be advocated .i want to state my view in three aspects __“body, by one's parents”, cosmetic surgery only change your external image .besides it costs really high. First I want to quote a sentence in Xiaojing the Classic of Filial Piety

“body, by one's parents”, A dutiful son should not do the irresponsible things for their body. In addition cosmetic surgery only change your external image The occupational psychologists, counselors Sun Qi guo said beauty is not a pass let alone the only pass . Plastic surgery can just change the image of the inherent instead of enhance the internal quality , and that is seeking to trifles and neglecting the essentials.

What’s more it costs really high ,we all know that beauty never comes cheap .you need pay for it ,the high money ,sometimes even your life .i think you may know the Super girl Wang bei died of respiratory failure during the cosmetic surgery accident she was the top 20 in Super girl of Chengdu district ,she was nominated to participate the national competition, .unfortunately she was died of a cosmetic surgery accident .what a pity .Indeed nowadays there are so many actress suffered from the unsuccessful cosmetic surgery as you can see in the picture .

Having seen these pictures I think you may understand why I emphasis that we should be cautious about using cosmetic surgery. To conclude my speech I want to restate my point I’m not against cosmetic surgery, but we should take it with caution. After all, the body is given by our parents we should take care of it and no do something which go against the filial piety and can only change our extra image since surgery it costs really high (may be a health hazard. )Thus we should not advocate cosmetic surgery.

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写作思路解析

叙事视角平和客观,搭配对比鲜明的写法凸显事物之间差异增添文字温度,素材寻常朴素,却能挖掘出悠长意蕴,小事件写出大感悟。不强行说教,以故事自然传递想法。文风从容淡定,适合偏向理性记叙、感悟类作文。

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写作前做好提纲规划,明确主次情节,避免详略失衡。持续练习细节刻画,多用动作、神态、环境描写替代概括叙述。

作文优点

段落长短搭配比较合理,不会出现大段密集文字,阅读观感舒适。拥有基础的细节描写意识,尝试还原场景,搭建简单画面。

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!文章整体偏向平铺直叙,叙事缺少起伏变化,情节张力不足,长时间阅读容易产生平淡感。细节描写数量偏少,大多采用概括式叙述,缺少具象化刻画,文字画面感偏弱,难以给读者留下深刻印象。

综合点评

整篇习作条理分明,层次安排合理,首尾呼应到位。情感依托真实事件抒发,避免空洞抒情。部分段落详略失衡,次要内容占用篇幅较多,削弱核心情节表现力。

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