初中暑假英语周记
Everyone always has a good Sunday. On Sundays, everybody does some things what he like.
Last Sunday, Jack had a relaxing Sunday. He got up 6 o’clock. After breakfast, Jack played basketball with his friends. They were very happy. Then he played the guitar in the room. And he sang songs very loudly. Though it’s very relaxing for him, it also make very noisy for neighbors. Maybe he should turn down the music. At noon, jack fed his pet cat henry. He is Jack’s favorite. Jack always play with him on the weekends. At night, he watched TV on the sofa. At the some time, he ate many delicious snacks. So he really had a great time.
At the of day, jack thought if I always have a relaxing Sunday like today. I will become the happiest boy all over the world.
【初中暑假英语周记】
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