初中英语周记

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2025-10-18 11:54:55

初中英语周记

It was the first week at school. It made me feel very happy because school life is much more interesting than holiday life. At school, I got up at 6 o’clock. It was very early. I think school rules can make me have a good habit. Then I brushed my teeth and washed my face. Later I went to have breakfast. There were many kinds of food in the school dining hall and some are delicious.

At 7 o’clock, I had to stand next to the school door because it was my duty. In my opinion, it was a bit boring. After that, I went to the classroom to have classes. My favorite subjects are math and Chinese. Because learning math can make me smart. Chinese can help us open our mind and make us more knowledgable.

After school, I went to take a shower and washed my clothes. Washing clothes was a little hard for me. However, I thought it was a kind of exercise.

At night, I went to bed at 9 o’clock. I had sweet dreams these days.

But my weekend life was boring because I had too much homework to do and too many books to read.

I hope I can have a more wonderful week next week!

【初中英语周记】

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