我的狗英语作文带翻译

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2025-10-09 12:20:08

我的狗英语作文带翻译

我有一只狗。它白黄相间。它看上去像一只小狐狸。它很可爱。我们都喜欢它。它的名字叫Hali。

它有两只小耳朵和两只又大又亮的眼睛。它的大鼻子是黑色的。它的'鼻子很敏锐,耳朵也很敏锐。它的牙齿很尖利。它经常在中午睡觉。上午和下午它通常和我们出去。它早晨起得很早。

很多人都非常喜欢Hali,因为它是一只很有趣、很好的狗。

I have a dog. It's white and yellow. It looks like a small fox.It's

very lovely. We like it very much. Its name is Hali.

It has two small ears and two big bright eyes. Its big nose is black. Its nose is very sensitive and its ears are sensitive,too. Its teeth are very sharp.

It often sleeps at noon. In the morning and in the afternoon it usually goes out with us. It gets up very early in the morning.

Many people like Hali very much because it's a very funny and nice dog.

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