小升初英语毕业作文

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作文篇目一 My Friend

样式一: I have many friends. My best friend is John. He is ten. He has small eyes and big ears. He is cool. Sometimes he is active. He likes summer best, because he likes swimming very much. He often plays football with his classmates on the weekend. I like John very much.

样式二: I have a good friend. She is ten. She has big eyes and long hair. She is cute, sometimes she is quiet. She likes spring best, because she likes flying kites very much. She often plays football with her classmates on the weekend. Guess! Who is she? Yes! She is Amy. I like her very much.

作文篇目二 My Teacher

样式一: I have many teachers. My favourite teacher is Miss Green. She is a math teacher. She is tall and thin. She has small eyes and a big mouth. She is strict and active. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming very much. She often climbs mountains on the weekend. We all like Miss Green very much.

样式二: I have many teachers. Who is my favourite teacher? Guess! She is a math teacher. She is tall and thin. She has small eyes and a big mouth. She is strict and active. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming very much. She often climbs mountains on the weekend. Yes! She is Miss Green. We all like her very much.

作文篇目三 My Family

样式一: I have a happy family: my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor. He is tall and strong. He is very active. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She is kind. She likes reading magazine after dinner. I’m a student. I’m very active. I like riding a bike on the weekend. I love my family!

样式二: There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor. He is tall and strong. He is very active. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She is kind. She likes reading magazines after dinner. I’m a student. I’m very active. I like riding a bike on the weekend. I have a happy family!

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