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    We had a discussion about whether it is the only way out for senior students to go to college.Views vary from person to person.

    The majority of us consider it very necessary to go to college.They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities.Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation.Very few students,that is about ten percent of the students,think it no use going university,because the tuition is too high for their family to afford.What's more,it's rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory jobs.Thirty percent of the students,however,believe “All roads lead to Rome.”Therefore it doesn't make any difference whether they go to college or not.

    In my opinion,we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland.

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