In the zoo
Oh,today is warm!I am going to the zoo.
In the zoo,I can see many animals.The elephants are walking.
The monkeys are swinging.There are many rabbits in the zoo.
They are very cute!Oh,look at the birds,they are flying.
I am so happy!Haha!
在动物园
噢，今天真暖和！我打算去动物园.
在动物园，我能看见许多动物.大象在走路.
猴子在荡秋千.在动物园里有许多兔子.
我真开心！哈哈！
I get early last Sunday. I take a bus to the zoo with my parents. We see many kinds of animals there, like elephants, pandas, lions, tigers … Some of them are very cute, but some are ugly. Some are scary, but some are friendly. My favorite animal is the panda. It is very cute and shy. My father takes a photo for me with the panda. I am tired when I get home, but I have a good time in the zoo.
I got up early last Sunday. I took a bus to the zoo with my parents. We saw many kinds of animals there, like elephants, pandas, lions, tigers … Some of them were very cute, but some were ugly. Some were scary, but some were friendly. My favorite animal is the panda. It is very cute and shy. My father took a photo for me with the panda. I was tired when I got home, but I had a good time in the zoo.
Visiting the Zoo
Yesterday was Sunday and it was a fine day.My parents and I visited the zoo.We went by bus.We started out at 8:00 in the morning and got there at 8:30.There were many people in the zoo.Some were watching the animals,some were playing games and others were resting under the trees.We went to watch the birds first.Then we came to see the monkeys.They were very lovely.We also saw the tigers and the lions.We saw many animals in the zoo.We felt very happy.
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